tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1639910315310077662.post6478197750408415699..comments2023-10-31T15:21:04.255+05:30Comments on "बे - तकल्लुफ़": 'इन्तेहा'Yogesh Sharmahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13296401748828517861noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1639910315310077662.post-44915772214288230062010-04-28T20:54:47.802+05:302010-04-28T20:54:47.802+05:30तुम एक रात के जागे हो यूं परेशां हो,
यहाँ इक उम्र ...तुम एक रात के जागे हो यूं परेशां हो,<br />यहाँ इक उम्र बीती, हमें नींद आये हुए,<br /><br />-बहुत खूब!Udan Tashtarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06057252073193171933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1639910315310077662.post-36015554035143817252010-04-28T20:46:56.658+05:302010-04-28T20:46:56.658+05:30Bhai Dilip...aap jaante hain ki likhne waalon ko b...Bhai Dilip...aap jaante hain ki likhne waalon ko bahut se chouge pahanne padhte hain...kisee azeez ke lahoo kee syaahee apnee kalam se baahar aa rahee hai ...aapkee bhabhee ne ek baar haath pakdaa to fir yeh din dekhne ko taras gaye ..Yogesh Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13296401748828517861noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1639910315310077662.post-7362337848497137872010-04-28T20:41:43.876+05:302010-04-28T20:41:43.876+05:30गली के बच्चों की ही, कुछ शरारत होगी,
ज़माना गुज़रा,...गली के बच्चों की ही, कुछ शरारत होगी, <br />ज़माना गुज़रा, किसी को दरवाजा खटखटाए हुए,<br /><br /><br />क्या बात है , अच्छी रचनाअजय कुमारhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15547441026727356931noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1639910315310077662.post-75384911639163198492010-04-28T20:40:10.941+05:302010-04-28T20:40:10.941+05:30kya hua sirji aaj kal prem me khuddari dikha rahe ...kya hua sirji aaj kal prem me khuddari dikha rahe hain....dil toota kya...:Dदिलीपhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15304203780968402944noreply@blogger.com